My king single is the comfiest thing I have experienced with the reasonably old springy mattress that's kind of like a sink hole when you lie in it. The sun shines in my room which makes my room warm up. You walk into my room and pop! On the floor you may notice a creamy carpet that barely shows its face when it's covered in soft furnishings i.e. Im about to take you on a tour around my room. Feel my carpet is soft and my walls feel kinda nice. I want to be out playing with my friends.. Because most people feel most at ease at home, then you can make this comparison to show youre the opposite of them. Roman blinds with large, bold coloured birds of many forms. The final piece of furniture your eyes get drawn to is my bed. Clothes everywhere all over the floor and I have no way of knowing if they are clean or dirtyI certainly don't want to smell them! The adjectives summarise the tranquil space really well. Then I set up a place to do stuff I love to do such as playing on my ipod, read books, play with lego, do trick shots and the funnest thing is well sleep. I have a gray shelving unit and an old looking bed side table. My room has a fresh air smell and, in the morning you can hear the birds chirping outside, if you were to walk into my room it would be clean and tidy just the way I like it. MY BEDROOM It sounds like the perfect place to go after school or work and feel comfortable and relaxed. Still have questions? On the rubric I would give you a R4. If you were to walk into my room you would see it is very bright. Some of the punctuation was a little muddled some of the I's were not where they needed to be and in between the full stops and the next sentence there were no spaces. Not always that bad because your mother gets sick of it and cleans it up a bit!!!!!!!!! I have a single bed which it is made from wood as its frame, it has a black with grey duvet, and if you look above it, theres an adorable tiger painting. My room has a modern style to it because of the things I have in it. Behind the door is a yellow, green and red stacker box with Jacksons toys in it. The entranceway to my room holds a flowery scene: crocheted poppies and daffodils blu-tacked to their places, accompanying a daisy-shaped doorbell. My room is upstairs so as soon as you walk up the stairs you are in my room. There is a big window at the back of the room. On my bed is a light purple duvet with a big blanket folded on the end. Good description of your room Peta. The pattern is bad, It is a circle and 2 squiggly lines that run beside it and keep doing the same thing until it reaches the roof. It is strewn with piles of clothes and virtually impossible to walk through. The accessories in my room are mainly either the same as or matching the colour scheme in my room. I dont really have any toys, My room has a lot of matching colors because my room is a modern color. I don't think you've left out a single thing about your room :), This sounds like the room I have been in there is lots of detail.The ending paragraph is great to end the description, This sounds very descriptive. It describes your room well. In my room I have a cactus and a succulent plant on my bedside table. The carpet is a soft grey colour with a squishy texture. On the opposite wall to my bed, lives my sisters king single bed with a black storage stool (that she doesn't use). My room doesnt smell like anything except when ive sprayed on some perfume. It is filled with different kinds of art, photos and bedding. My walls are plain white with all my pink and blue colours scattered around my room. Which one of them is a basketball poster and on that wall, I have a light to look over my cabinet in the corner of my room to brighten it up. Shoes and clothes that I was too lazy to put back in draws in a bunch on the floor in front of it. The carpet is basking in the rays of the afternoon sun. On my far side wall I have a bright red clipboard with flowers on it, on the clipboard I have many pictures of my family, friends and me. Furniture in my room is perfect. 4+, Nice work describing your room. Other than for sleeping I use my bedroom to do my homework (at my desk), catch up with all the goss on social media and of course as a space to be alone for a little while. I have many colours in my room. DVD, TV) and add comas in some places. Now my layout I don't really like my layout but it's ok I guess but it can be better the reason I don't like it is my bed is too far away from my tv. R4. Near where this wall joins the feature wall there is another painting. I usually put it on my birch table. 3+. On the wall is a black outlined photo frame with photos of me and my family and our holiday to Australia. There's really not much sound in my room at all, it's quiet and if you're lucky you can hear the animals outside. Also another way to brighten the room would be to open the curtains. My favorite place in the whole house, my space, my pride and joy, my happy place where I spend most of my time. So I would like to describe to you my own little world. Look at the picture and make sentences to describe the bedroom. I wonder what you would change about it if you had the chance too? Lastly is the layout. My bedroom. Yes it definately is the best bedroom in the house and yes we are all jealous!!!! Now let me take you on a virtual journey of my own bedroom. 2. as far apart as the poles. Cleanliness, my room is not what you call clean my clothes from school lying on my bed jerseys not been hung up because I'm to lazy, my bed all messed up because I never make it, but some things aren't all bad like the way I have set up stuff that makes it look really cool and neat. Not quite how I see your room - it is a typical boys bedroom with a LOT of mess on the floor and you also forgot to say that you chuck stuff under your bed as well as the "random drawers"! But you could be a bit more tidier. great work i love that you did good punctuation and it was a good story. It is very plain with no rugs on it. I also have a desk and chair next to my big window. My bed is really soft and comfy, just the way I like it. But i think I saw some spelling mistakes. The second style of my room is boys simply because its a boys only room for me and Jackson to share. Sen. Lindsey Graham cruises to reelection in S.C. Hickenlooper beats Gardner for Colo. Senate seat, 'Hamilton' star changes lyrics of song for voters, Trump signals he won't try to declare victory prematurely, Ex-NBA star Eddie Johnson dies at 65 in prison, Expert: A Biden win could lead to mask mandate, testing, Clothing items that may get you turned away from the polls, Jerry Jones: DiNucci's 1st NFL start was 'a lot for him', How Georgias blue drift changes politics nationwide, Battle intensifies over which votes will count. The ceilings are high and have a wooden trim around the perimeter of the room. With boxes on top and a big space where it looks with one box is missing. I have a light pink duvet and a red, white and grey stripy duvet. 4. It is a stationary calamity! Then there's my desk covered in books, pens and rubbish along with my PJs and sports gear spread everywhere . We dont need all these lights on!. My room is a square room and is medium sized, I am lucky enough that I have it all to myself. The wall opposite the door has three picture that me and my sisters had painted quite a while ago. Bent u genteresseerd neem gerust contact met ons op. Well done!!! Opposite my window is my cupboard. Everyday Life Metaphors. This crossword clue Metaphor for It stinks like moldy cheese. why are clocks (The ones u hang on the wall) still important in the digital age? I have a white bedside table with an alarm clock, a rose red touch lamp, and a blue bluetooth speaker. . We cannot afford to heat our house in the winter. The layout of my room is great and I really like it. The pencils are mostly sharp, pointy ready to be used. November 2016 Lastly how it looks. Theres room to improve. Probably you will see my bed first it's right under my window right in the center in my room. Mabelles Bedroom Description Somehow it is always warm with the right temperature. Poor thing, your hands are as cold as ice! People are sliding down the stairs, someone has a toy train set out, and someone else is playing with dolls on the front step. Secondly, the wall decorations. The layout is sort of a P shape without the hole. In this classic line from Shakespeare's Romeo and Juliet, Romeo spots a light coming from Juliets bedroom, causing him to compare Juliet to a sunrise an image that evokes a sense of wonder, hope, and happiness. The color of my wardrobe connected to my wall is black I would probably want to change the color to the same as the wall. When I sit in bed with my eyes peeking out of my blanket it makes me wonder if something scary is hiding behind the box. I like it because it has all my precious stuff. When you walk in, on the left is a window and a desk, straight forward is a gigantic, wide window and to the right is my bed, wardrobe and heater. The most recurring feature would be its lovely and soft texture which you could possibly just lie on forever. In my room i have a lot of accessories such as my all blacks poster, My cricket bat signed by the black caps, my smelly clothes, coat hangers and so on. I think my bedroom is perfect my way because of the colors, layout and the design. I roll around on it and it feels great. For me and my sisters to fit in our room the room has to be laid out a specific way, but it is pretty comfy. The layout of my room is tidy and all crammed together, but the way everything fits together just adds to the style and layout of the room. When I walk into my room I feel alone and relaxed. I suck creamy cock. The creamy brown carpet is pleasant. On the left hand side is a bunk bed which has Jacksons (my little brother) bed at the bottom and my bed at the top with really messy covers. Your email address will not be published. I use my bedroom to sleep, relax and sometimes do my homework. So, a swamp is a perfect place for them to live. I like the color because it's not to fancy it's just the right color so it doesn't make me constantly wanting to change the color. I have heaps of ski gear but I dont really have anywhere to put it so even if I do clean my room, my ski gear normally stays on the floor. Old messy modern and not cared about is the first and foremost idea of the room. There are lots of accessories in the room. Room Metaphors and Similes. And I would try and keep it a bit more tidy! I enter the room and dump my bulky school bags onto the ground. With its concrete floor and the temporary plywood walls. You described thing very well. The carpet a deep chocolate brown to complement a pure white set of draws. The best metaphors come from the heart. I really liked that you had some really awesome words in your writing that really hooked me in and made it more intresting to keep on reading along. Good work a nice peace of writing. 3+, In your description there was quiet a few words spelled wrong, but your punctuation was pretty good, you have edited it pretty well but maybe just one more cheek. As you walk up the old skinny hallway, at the end, opposite the bathroom, you will find a bedroom,which you'd agreed looks like a bomb has gone off and spread all the junk everywhere, and yes its my bedroom, possibly the messiest in the house. A metaphor is a trope or figure of speech in which an implied comparison is made between two This was well edited, but to get even better look over and over. cock is like. My bedroom. Not too big that it's not cozy, and not too small it's cramped. I would really like to move things around,like move my desk away from my bed (so I don't always knock my head on the corner), and move everything against the wall so I can do wacky things with mo.re space in the centre of my room, although I would have to actually clean it once in awhile. 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